hailfireburning

I love to read and write. This is my first time writing erotic fiction, and I would love some positive feedback, or even some constructive critisism. I'd like to apologize to those who read my story when it was first published, I am new to this site and wasn't clear on how to publish the sotry in the right catagory. I have since fixed the problem, and it is no longer in the anime section, thank you to those who reviewed and let me know.